AGENDA 11/14

Introduction revision: Use highlighters to identify the five necessary components in a partner's paragraph. Then write 2 concrete comments to help your partner revise his/her introduction draft.

See my sample with highlighting

Seminar Part 2 over environment and nature: Steinbeck's "Americans and the Land" and Ehrlich's "The Solitude of Open Spaces."

HW: Revise introduction drafts as needed to include all 5 components and prepare for tomorrow's seminar.