Grammar Practice: Pronoun ambiguity and consistency review
Multiple-choice: Review answers for "China" passage
Begin Logical Fallacies PowerPoint
Notes for Logical Fallacies PowerPoint
NOTE: Period 2 went through sentimental appeals
Period 3 reached ad hominem arguments
Period 5 reached bandwagon
We'll continue this on Monday!
HW: None...enjoy it while it lasts...
Friday, March 18, 2011
Thursday, March 17, 2011
AGENDA 3/17
EAP Essay
HW: Complete the multiple-choice practice passage on "China" (take approximately 12 minutes), then go back over the passage and look up any unfamiliar vocabulary or terms. We'll review this tomorrow.
HW: Complete the multiple-choice practice passage on "China" (take approximately 12 minutes), then go back over the passage and look up any unfamiliar vocabulary or terms. We'll review this tomorrow.
Wednesday, March 16, 2011
AGENDA 3/16
Prepare for tomorrow's EAP essay - bring a pencil!
Read and discuss Topic 1 and read sample essays
Review scoring guide for EAP essay
HW: Read the sample essays for Topic I and/or for Topic II and Topic III, and prepare as needed for tomorrow. You'll receive a multiple-choice AP passage in class tomorrow to complete before class on Friday. Please allow approximately 12 minutes to complete the multiple-choice passage, then spend time looking up unfamiliar words or terms that occur in the multiple-choice passage or questions/answers.
Read and discuss Topic 1 and read sample essays
Review scoring guide for EAP essay
HW: Read the sample essays for Topic I and/or for Topic II and Topic III, and prepare as needed for tomorrow. You'll receive a multiple-choice AP passage in class tomorrow to complete before class on Friday. Please allow approximately 12 minutes to complete the multiple-choice passage, then spend time looking up unfamiliar words or terms that occur in the multiple-choice passage or questions/answers.
Tuesday, March 15, 2011
AGENDA 3/15
Grammar practice: pronoun ambiguity #1
Partner share: paragraphs and thesis for King Lear prompt
Introduce EAP Argument essay - letter to families about Thursday's essay test
HW: Read Topic I and write an introduction paragraph (hook + thesis). Brainstorm evidence--what have you read, seen, or experienced that would help you prove your point?
Partner share: paragraphs and thesis for King Lear prompt
Introduce EAP Argument essay - letter to families about Thursday's essay test
HW: Read Topic I and write an introduction paragraph (hook + thesis). Brainstorm evidence--what have you read, seen, or experienced that would help you prove your point?
Thursday, March 10, 2011
AGENDA 3/10
Understanding Toulmin Arguments:
Practice thinking through the process of reasons/data, claims, and warrants with ideas from the Thomas "Mistakes" prompt and the Gabler "Entertainment" prompt
If time permits, begin logical fallacies lesson or complete multiple-choice practice.
HW: 3 paragraphs of The Great Gatsby rhetorical analysis essay due before the weekend. Please attach your clean, revised copy at the front, and staple your color-marked drafts from earlier this week (along with your revision plan) to the back, along with your annotated (previously graded) passage.
Practice thinking through the process of reasons/data, claims, and warrants with ideas from the Thomas "Mistakes" prompt and the Gabler "Entertainment" prompt
If time permits, begin logical fallacies lesson or complete multiple-choice practice.
HW: 3 paragraphs of The Great Gatsby rhetorical analysis essay due before the weekend. Please attach your clean, revised copy at the front, and staple your color-marked drafts from earlier this week (along with your revision plan) to the back, along with your annotated (previously graded) passage.
Tuesday, March 8, 2011
AGENDAS 3/8 AND 3/9
CAHSEE Special Schedule
The Great Paragraph Switch:
A) Give your body paragraphs to someone to read. That student should read your FIRST body paragraph only and respond, as a reader, asking questions about anything that is confusing. Next, check the opening claim of the paragraph to make sure it contains the necessary components: the first OR second sentence of the paragraph should contain the author's name, a literary technique or rhetorical device, and a purpose (in order to ______). Then, the student should begin to color-mark your FIRST paragraph only.
1) first color: highlight all instances of the rhetorical device or technique's name in the passage. Synonyms should be highlighted (my sample paper refers to both "interrupted sentences" and "dashes"). Label this color "rhetorical technique."
2) second color: highlight all instances of the author's name (Fitzgerald). Be sure it is spelled correctly and capitalized. If the student uses a pronoun (he) that refers to the author, highlight that, too. Label this color "author's name."
3) third color: highlight all direct quotations. Check to see that they do not BEGIN sentences. If a quotation begins a sentence, write "introduce w/ meaningful 1/2 sentence" in the margins. Check the punctuation of direct quotations--commas and periods should go INSIDE quotation marks. If it is the FIRST instance of the quotation, the quotation should NOT have a comma or period and instead should be followed by the page number in parentheses, with the period AFTER the citation.
Also, check to see that the student has given a "sentence-length" quotation (longer quotation with a citation) BEFORE listing individual words. After the quotation, the student should return to the quotation and discuss individual word choices made by the author. If the student has NOT returned to the quotation to discuss individual words/short phrases, write "discuss connotations of individual words" in the margins. Label this color "direct quotations."
4) fourth color: argument verbs. Highlight all instances of argument verbs, words like: reveals, suggests, shows, states, describes, depicts, illustrates, emphasizes, exposes, and so on. Next, check the TENSE of these words--they should all be in present tense (suggests) or present progressive tense (is suggesting). If an argument verb is in past tense, label it by writing "present tense!" in the margins near the word. Label this color "argument verbs."
5) fifth color: link to theme and purpose. Highlight all phrases or sentences that link back to the original purpose established in the claim (in order to _____). These are typically found in the opening and final sentences of paragraphs, and sometimes after discussing connotations of individual words. Label this color "link to purpose/theme."
B) Give the student's paper to another student sitting in a different region of the class. That student then repeats step A and 1-5 for the SECOND body paragraph.
C) Return the paper to the original student.
D) Original student should then read over the comments and color-marking. Then, list 3 revisions you will make to your paper based on today's activity. Be specific! Sample revisions:
1) I will vary my argument verbs because I used "suggests" 3 times in one paragraph
2) I will discuss connotations of particular words after direct quotations, and talk about why Fitzgerald used "a national figure" and "jumping"
3) I will add page numbers in citation after my direct quotations and will move the commas to the inside of quotation marks.
HW: For Thursday, incorporate these revisions and print out a clean, revised copy of these two paragraphs, with this color-marked draft and your revision plan stapled to the back. Add to the clean, revised copy a third paragraph (introduction OR another body paragraph), keeping in mind these same comments.
The Great Paragraph Switch:
A) Give your body paragraphs to someone to read. That student should read your FIRST body paragraph only and respond, as a reader, asking questions about anything that is confusing. Next, check the opening claim of the paragraph to make sure it contains the necessary components: the first OR second sentence of the paragraph should contain the author's name, a literary technique or rhetorical device, and a purpose (in order to ______). Then, the student should begin to color-mark your FIRST paragraph only.
1) first color: highlight all instances of the rhetorical device or technique's name in the passage. Synonyms should be highlighted (my sample paper refers to both "interrupted sentences" and "dashes"). Label this color "rhetorical technique."
2) second color: highlight all instances of the author's name (Fitzgerald). Be sure it is spelled correctly and capitalized. If the student uses a pronoun (he) that refers to the author, highlight that, too. Label this color "author's name."
3) third color: highlight all direct quotations. Check to see that they do not BEGIN sentences. If a quotation begins a sentence, write "introduce w/ meaningful 1/2 sentence" in the margins. Check the punctuation of direct quotations--commas and periods should go INSIDE quotation marks. If it is the FIRST instance of the quotation, the quotation should NOT have a comma or period and instead should be followed by the page number in parentheses, with the period AFTER the citation.
Also, check to see that the student has given a "sentence-length" quotation (longer quotation with a citation) BEFORE listing individual words. After the quotation, the student should return to the quotation and discuss individual word choices made by the author. If the student has NOT returned to the quotation to discuss individual words/short phrases, write "discuss connotations of individual words" in the margins. Label this color "direct quotations."
4) fourth color: argument verbs. Highlight all instances of argument verbs, words like: reveals, suggests, shows, states, describes, depicts, illustrates, emphasizes, exposes, and so on. Next, check the TENSE of these words--they should all be in present tense (suggests) or present progressive tense (is suggesting). If an argument verb is in past tense, label it by writing "present tense!" in the margins near the word. Label this color "argument verbs."
5) fifth color: link to theme and purpose. Highlight all phrases or sentences that link back to the original purpose established in the claim (in order to _____). These are typically found in the opening and final sentences of paragraphs, and sometimes after discussing connotations of individual words. Label this color "link to purpose/theme."
B) Give the student's paper to another student sitting in a different region of the class. That student then repeats step A and 1-5 for the SECOND body paragraph.
C) Return the paper to the original student.
D) Original student should then read over the comments and color-marking. Then, list 3 revisions you will make to your paper based on today's activity. Be specific! Sample revisions:
1) I will vary my argument verbs because I used "suggests" 3 times in one paragraph
2) I will discuss connotations of particular words after direct quotations, and talk about why Fitzgerald used "a national figure" and "jumping"
3) I will add page numbers in citation after my direct quotations and will move the commas to the inside of quotation marks.
HW: For Thursday, incorporate these revisions and print out a clean, revised copy of these two paragraphs, with this color-marked draft and your revision plan stapled to the back. Add to the clean, revised copy a third paragraph (introduction OR another body paragraph), keeping in mind these same comments.
Monday, March 7, 2011
AGENDA 3/7
Super-monster-ultra vocabulary quiz over both lists from The Great Gatsby
Work on body paragraphs for your rhetorical analysis essay on a passage from The Great Gatsby
Vocab List #1
Vocab List #2
Write two body paragraphs for your Gatsby rhetorical analysis essay - due Monday.
Pust's sample paper on a passage from Ch 1 of The Great Gatsby
Handout to help you write your body paragraphs
Multiple-choice practice (if time permits)
HW: Period 2- two body paragraphs due tomorrow; a third paragraph (body or intro) due Thursday
Periods 3 and 5 - three paragraphs due Wednesday (two body paragraphs and an introduction or three body paragraphs)
Work on body paragraphs for your rhetorical analysis essay on a passage from The Great Gatsby
Vocab List #1
Vocab List #2
Write two body paragraphs for your Gatsby rhetorical analysis essay - due Monday.
Pust's sample paper on a passage from Ch 1 of The Great Gatsby
Handout to help you write your body paragraphs
Multiple-choice practice (if time permits)
HW: Period 2- two body paragraphs due tomorrow; a third paragraph (body or intro) due Thursday
Periods 3 and 5 - three paragraphs due Wednesday (two body paragraphs and an introduction or three body paragraphs)
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